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作者信息 | 主题: 英语四六级考试写作临场实战思路与经验分享27661 | |||||
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2012-2-11 15:19:19
学生兼职工作 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com 第一部分: 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com 总体原则:六个字:先结构后表达。 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com 总体做法:三步法 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com 1. 审题:两项内容:1)英文标题+2)汉语提纲 (如果汉语提纲不是三条,则将其转化为三条提纲) 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com 2. 将三个汉语www.cet1688.com提纲转化为一个英文表达,充当该段主题句。(首尾段可无主题句,但中间段落最好有) 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com 3. 将主题句扩展成一个英文段落。(方法:举例、数据、对比、列举、补充说明、因果法等) 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com 第二部分:实例及具体时间分配 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com 第1、2步为准备工作 时间控制在三分钟以内: 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com (注:建议考生带上手表,以便掌握写作时间分配,超过三分钟按照已经列出的关键词的内容展开文章的开头部分) 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com 如一道六级的写作考题为: 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic College Students’ Part-time Jobs. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com 1. 有些人赞成大学生做兼职, 有人反对 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com 2. 我的看法 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com 审题:1. 题目:College Students’ Part-time Jobs 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com 2. 提纲:1. 有些人赞成大学生做兼职, 有人反对;2. 我的看法 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com 题目关键词为: part-time jobs 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com 3. 提纲转化为三条: 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com 1. 有些人持相反意见 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com 2. 有些人赞成大学生做兼职 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com 3. 我的看法 (无需写出) 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com 先结构: 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com 联想新东方课堂所讲:三段或四段式结构,且每段只写一项内容。 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com 以“三段式”为例: 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com 后表达:(三方面:句、词、衔接)关键词罗列 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com 1. 联想开篇句式:when it comes to …, people’ opinions differ/vary. 或者it is a common phenomenon for …im*~^=7 to do sth, 或者 it can be noticed that an increasing number of … 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com 将这些表达以关键词的形式列出:如: when… 或者 it is … 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com 2. 转化主题句: 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com 1) 有些人持反对意见- Others hold the opposite view. 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com 理由:1. main task- academic study, 2. society complex- cheated 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com 2) 有些人赞成大学生做兼职- hold the positive view 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com 理由:1. ease financial burden 2. enrich experience 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com 3) 我的看法- both right ……. 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com 3. 扩展成文 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com 例文如下: 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com It can be noticed that an increasing number of college students are doing part-time jobs in their free time. However, people’ opinions on this issue vary greatly. Some hold the opposite view. Firstly, they claim that it is academic pursuit that is college students’ primary task. Secondly, owing to the complexity of the society, students may be easily cheated 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com Others, on the contrary, are of students’ part-time jobs. They argue that by doing part-time jobs, students can earn a little money to ease their parents’ financial burden. Besides, they believe that part-time jobs enable them to enrich their personal experience and broaden their horizons. Thus, they can acquire the knowledge which can not be obtained in campus. 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com 浪漫烛光 www.langmanzg.com
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